Issue #4 Page 12

Issue #4 Page 12

Wednesday, the 23rd of November, 2011

I don't get it why after being a vicious werewol in Skyrim, later still guards will come at you and will recognize your bad actions, doesn't make any sense! .
Anyway, did you know you can have your own avatar when you make a comment here below? You only have to go to gravatar.com and register. Isn't much of a hassle, believe me.

And, yes... Ivan is well, having a strange teeth issue, I wonder what it is. For those who guessed previously you won ...a cookie, horray! :D
And about Luna... don't worry wel'll get back with her pretty soon.

Next page should come on Saturday if I everything goes according to plan. Bye!

Leo
83 Responses to "Issue #4 Page 12"
GEo says:November 23, 2011 at 12:44 amto start First!!!

Yay, I never guess stuff like this. I am happy and hope we get to see more Ivan! Wait he is a Vampire....well F*&^%%^%%^k!!! j/k

Finally, Skyrim, pfffft, Skyward Sword is where it is at. Though seriously I do need to check out Skyrim
Uberman5000 says:November 23, 2011 at 12:45 amHOLY CRAP! Didn't see that coming. Those Animas are in for a BEATING!
GEo says:November 23, 2011 at 1:07 amAs long as we dont get anotehr twist and he gets killed before fully transforming. I hope not though, I like him and want to see him, Luna and Fang as a pack.
oracle33c says:November 23, 2011 at 1:43 amYAY cookie!!! YAY ivan!
War777 says:November 23, 2011 at 3:26 amAn other tf part! That's the best parts of the whole comic :)

Keep up the good work Leo, you're the best!
Kare says:November 23, 2011 at 4:56 amI guessed he was tough, but not that tough! (uhhh my cookie :'( )
Good job anyway, looking forward to saturday!
Finnish girl says:November 23, 2011 at 6:37 amNice work! Well i don't still like the idea of Ivan becoming a werewolf and meat Luna and others, but i still love this manga!
Takim says:November 23, 2011 at 7:16 amThere is hell to pay those animas are dead and this totally awsome
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 8:13 amI knew it!! Go Ivan!!

Ps. I love a good twist. Even a predictable one XD keep it up Leo
Hunter says:November 23, 2011 at 8:39 amVery good comics!
hunters fight the werewolf ???
Waffles says:November 23, 2011 at 9:17 amI KNEW IT!

*noms on the cookie*
Moregreen says:November 23, 2011 at 9:34 amSurprise Surprise


(\/)
(O.O)<-----me as i seen the page
Cinderwolf14 says:November 23, 2011 at 9:36 amAWESOME!!!!! This is gonna get goooood lol. Now im pumped and can hardly wait to see the beating Ivan gives those Animas xD
Cunninglinguine says:November 23, 2011 at 10:26 amLast panel has left me with a toothache.
Mike says:November 23, 2011 at 10:49 amHi Leo,

Welcome back! This is Mike, your official grammar Nazi. Did you get any of my recent e-mails? I noticed my changes weren’t incorporated into your latest pages. As for this page:

Top panel: He should be saying, “But why did the boy have this?”

That’s it! Looking forward to the next page.
Mike
GEo says:November 23, 2011 at 10:56 amto Cinderwolf14- I too am excited for the beat down, but he may still have some trouble even as a wolf. Since he is younger and smaller, his wolf form wont be as big, he is still a pup. But I am ready for him to give them a good beating and then make a "strategic withdraw".
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 11:29 amIKR! Ivan is gonna give those animals a run for their money ... or at least i hope ...
Court says:November 23, 2011 at 12:34 pmHey Leo,i just started reading your comic and i happen to love it! Cant wait to see what happens next
\Kishio/ says:November 23, 2011 at 2:15 pmI'm really anxious to see Luna. It would be great if she turns into the anthro form and appered suddenly to help Ivan.

I WANT TO SEE BLOOD!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!
WarlordMike says:November 23, 2011 at 2:20 pmSo Ivan was a wuffie, I see - the big guy was just protecting him from harm!

IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW! D8

...Ahem. Sorry about that, slight moment of cognizance there... ^_^;;;
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 2:54 pmFrom the second page of this issue, i just found Ivan so cute (I mean like little kid, 'i just wanna pinch his cheeks' cute to let you all know XD)!!! He doesn't compare to Luna or Fang but i hope to see more of him even after this is over
Finnish girl says:November 23, 2011 at 3:00 pm@Kishio

I don't think Luna will come to help Ivan, cause it would take time to get to the forest were Ivan is. Plus, i think Luna has some other problems with the other anima what is shown in the cover. I think he is the boy that,Luna almost hit.
Takim says:November 23, 2011 at 3:26 pmI just have to say I had a feeling ivan was a werewolf and what does colie have to do with all this does she develop a relation with characeter you might add later in the comic I must know and a have you ever watched trigun badlands rumble it is a awsome movie even only one of the iriginal voice actors return thats vashs voice actor jonny yong bosh but the people who did wolfwood(jeff nimoy) and merral and mily are all replace im pissed off by that part but still a great movie
Wanny says:November 23, 2011 at 4:02 pmThis is getting interesting. I wonder if Luna and Collie will make it there soon...
werewolfdude says:November 23, 2011 at 4:09 pmWTF!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!
werewolfdude says:November 23, 2011 at 4:12 pmIs ivan a werewolf?
WofieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 4:30 pmYes. Yes he is ... and some of us already knew before this page x3
Cinderwolf14 says:November 23, 2011 at 4:33 pm@werewolfdude

Well lets see...on the ground screaming,mouth bleeding,and giant pointed teeth... i think its safe to say he's a werewolf xD
Rey Fox says:November 23, 2011 at 5:30 pmWhy does everyone think that Ivan, a prepubescent (and possibly transforming for the first time) werewolf is going to stand a chance against two full-grown and battle-experienced werecats?
Rey Fox says:November 23, 2011 at 5:31 pmOh, and deeply wounded, I might add. (unless he's one of those instantly healing werewolves)
Wanny says:November 23, 2011 at 5:38 pm@WolfieLove:
The "it burns!" part was obvious enough.

@Rey Fox:
That's up to Leo, heh.
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 5:52 pm@Wanny:
i know right. i was suspicious as soon as he like saw the first one and the animal was all like "How did we know we were coming" and all that. yep. i pay close attention x3

@Rey Fox:
Idk ... who knows. he might scare them or something ...
Eidolon says:November 23, 2011 at 6:02 pm@WolfieLove:
They do seem worried about the fact that he's shifting. Perhaps relative strength actually favors the werewolves over the animas. After all, we only know that the werewolves were massacred at the hands of the animas, but we don't know how. It's possible that, rather than through brute strength, it was through cunning. Which would make some sense for a cat race.

Of course, in this little scene that's playing out, all Boss Anima needs to do is borrow that knife and deeply slit Ivan's throat as he starts shifting. Shifting is like powering up in Dragonball Z. Unless you've got some wonky sense of honor stopping you, just make the move to win the fight and take 'em out *before* they "power up".

Of course, for fan service and fun, I doubt that's what'll happen. :3
Leo says:November 23, 2011 at 6:09 pm@Wanny Saying "it's up to me", it's like taking away the right to speculate in any way about a fictional work like Alpha Luna. Please don't say that again, I encourage rational thinking and I appreciate a lot the way any of you perceives the characters and how the story unfolds :)
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 6:11 pm@Eidolon:
I really doubt that would happen. they may be the bad guys but im sure they have at least a small bit of honor and integrity but you do make a good point
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 6:16 pmLate reply XD to Leo but im glad your one of those artists that take the comments into opinion :D
Cinderwolf14 says:November 23, 2011 at 6:28 pm@WolfieLove

That's 1 of the reasons everyone likes Leo :)

@Eidolon
If animas were so heartless do u think they would have let Ivan live as long as he has during all this?They will hopfully/probably freak out when/if Ivan fully transforms and flee.
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 7:07 pmwell add me to the people who like Leo list :D
lunafan09 says:November 23, 2011 at 7:36 pmI wonder if later on in this chapter we see Luna again because if I recall in the previous chapter, Luna and Colleen were in the night....during a full moon....and you guys should know what happened at the end of Chapter 3 by now! Nice one there Leo!
Wanny says:November 23, 2011 at 8:05 pm@Leo:

Seems that I didn't say it correctly. What I meant is that we can speculate many things, but in the end you have the ultimate word about it :P
It was basically "who knows".

And I don't have anything about speculation. All the contrary.
KingWolf111 says:November 23, 2011 at 8:18 pmHave been reading this comic for a while. Love it so far Leo. Take your time with updates. I find the waiting the best part. I suspected Ivan may be a werewolf. I hope he survives long enough to transform and kick ass.
Adolf Mingan says:November 23, 2011 at 9:29 pmI had the feeling Ivan would be a werewolf. hehehe!!!
adolf mingan says:November 23, 2011 at 9:31 pmI had the feeling Ivan would be a werewolf. hehehe!!!
WolfieLove says:November 23, 2011 at 9:35 pmyou know ... i just went through and i think its page 23, 24, or 25 of the first issue and i think its even forshadowing Ivan there (When his dad was talking to Fang) but i didnt even think of it ...
Bucc-i says:November 23, 2011 at 9:48 pm@Leo
In Skyrim, they can smell you coming. You know that wet dog smell is hard to get out of your skin.
Cinderwolf14 says:November 23, 2011 at 10:42 pm@Adolf Mingan

I had the smarts to know Ivan would be a werewolf lol (jk jk)
Cinderwolf14 says:November 23, 2011 at 10:45 pm@WolfieLove

I just went back and looked and you may be right
TimidTabby says:November 24, 2011 at 1:12 amWell this is interesting. Can't wait till Saturday...evening when I get off work ^_^;
WolfieLove says:November 24, 2011 at 8:43 am@Cinderwolf14:
i know. I didnt even realize it the first time i read it but there is some foreshadowing in there :D
Leo says:November 24, 2011 at 8:51 am@Bucc-i Oh well , I guess that can't b helped xP

@WolfieLove I think most of authors take comments into consideration. Is not that I'm gonna change the future of the story but the way you perceive and respond to the story helps me to put myself in the point of view of the reader. And so, improve my writing :)
WolfieLove says:November 24, 2011 at 9:01 am@Leo:
Well i kinda realized you had this planned the whole time. YOU ROCK you know that right XD keep up the epic work.
\Kishio/ says:November 24, 2011 at 9:29 am@Finish Girl

Yeah, I know. I just said that would be great to see two werewolf fighting side to side.

Hey Leo, how much time has passed since chapter 1?
'Cuz Ivan looked like a 7 years old kid. Now I would give him 12. I Know that is less time than this, maybe two days, but... he looks older.
Cinderwolf14 says:November 24, 2011 at 9:55 amYeah i totally forgot!!!! Ivan did look 6 or 7 in chapter 1 but now looks between 12-14.
Leo says:November 24, 2011 at 10:06 amMy bad. My lack of consistency xp. He is 12 years old. I kinda draw him to young the first time around.
WolfieLove says:November 24, 2011 at 10:13 amI personally think he looks the same and still little kid cute XD he does look a little bit more mature in this issue then in the other one but i really dont see a major difference but thats my personal opinion
Nicthalon says:November 24, 2011 at 12:11 pmYou mention Skyrim and werewolf? How about a Skyrim werewolf KILLING THE ANNOYING KIDS! muahahahahaha!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sNuFNZijnCo
Cinderwolf14 says:November 24, 2011 at 1:38 pm@Leo

Darn it im 14 so if he was real he's under my dating limit xD jk
WolfieLove says:November 24, 2011 at 3:34 pm@Cinderwolf14:
im 14 too and i just find Ivan little kid cute (not dateing cute. GROSS) but cute like my 12 year old little sister XD
KingWolf111 says:November 24, 2011 at 4:05 pmI wonder if this is Ivan's first transformation, I also wonder if his father knew about him being a werewolf before this.
Wanny says:November 24, 2011 at 7:12 pmIt definitely seems that will be Ivan's first TF, heheh
yamijenny87 says:November 24, 2011 at 7:20 pmvery well done leo ^_^
KingWolf111 says:November 24, 2011 at 8:19 pmI wonder if what his father said he was portecting. He was referring to Ivan.
RedSky says:November 24, 2011 at 8:51 pmMan , this is getting good. Plus I got Johnny Cash playin while I read this. Life is good.
Cinderwolf14 says:November 24, 2011 at 9:16 pm@WolfieLove

Well im just joking around and i don't really agree that Ivan is "pinch his cheeks little kid cute" thats just strange.
WolfieLove says:November 24, 2011 at 9:31 pm@Cinderwolf14:
Sorey Ivan just reminds me of my little sisters boyfriend (both 12) and i find them so very cute XD (no relation to the comic i guess but whatever)

Anyway back to the comic, ya, i really think thats what Ivans dad was refering to by a 'treasure' to protect :3
KingWolf111 says:November 24, 2011 at 9:34 pm@WolfieLove:
Ya I think that was what he meant. Which leads me to belive that his father at least knew about him being a werewolf. Maybe when was asking Ivan to fight, he meant for him to TF and fight the Animas.
Cinderwolf14 says:November 24, 2011 at 9:40 pm@KingWolf111

I agree that the "treasure" was probably Ivan cuz he came out for the first time after his father mentioned that.(Irony? maby) And im positive that his dad meant for him to transform aswell but ofcourse Ivan's just like "WTH IS WRONG WITH ME!!!!"
GEo says:November 24, 2011 at 10:53 pm@Leo
If you listen to the fans in your writing, then I am on the side of letting Ivan change and survive, he has little kid awesome bad ass potential. Do not kill him!
@Leo says:November 24, 2011 at 10:55 pmSorry for the second post, but is 12 the technical age that werewolves have their first change? Is that the age that Fang had his?
Cinderwolf14 says:November 25, 2011 at 1:47 amI vote not to have Ivan killed xD.Seriously though plz don't kill off Ivan
KingWolf111 says:November 25, 2011 at 5:58 amI also do not want Ivan to die. He is too cute and badass,
WolfieLove says:November 25, 2011 at 7:19 amNO! Dont kill Ivan! He'll totaly woop some ass and hes too cute. I vote keep him.

@Leo:
Well in many stories, there is no texhnical age. Im writeing a novel about werewolves and the main character chanves for the first time on her 13th birthday but ive read stories where theve changed at 10. Its really writers opinion i guess
Leo says:November 25, 2011 at 9:04 amPeople, I didn't say I'd change the story due comments xD, I said I appreciate the feedback because it makes me be a better writer. About Ivan, just use your feelings well ;)

About the first change, it will be later explained in the story. But you could figure out by now a few things :)
Cinderwolf14 says:November 25, 2011 at 9:06 am@WolfieLove

Theres no certain age...ive seen movies/shows where they change at 10,14,19(alphaluna),ect.So yeah its up to the writer what age they change into a werewolf.
RedSky says:November 25, 2011 at 3:41 pmSo you don't change the story due to comments Leo. Interesting. Very interesting. But for now , time to kill a man just to watch him die.
Barricade64 says:November 25, 2011 at 4:01 pmWell, that's an unexpected twist. Kudos to you Leo, that gave me genuine surprise. I do hope we get back to Luna and Collie soon though, I want to see how they're handing their situation.
\Kishio/ says:November 25, 2011 at 5:55 pmThe Brazilian werewolf legend says that the first change is at 16. Or 18. I don't remember very well. Whatever, I want to see Luna ripping off some Animas!!
WolfieLove says:November 25, 2011 at 7:14 pmEvery legend is different. The change age really just depemds on the story teller or the writer/artest
ethanpike says:January 29, 2013 at 10:16 amI agree, not all werewolfs are bad.
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